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dss42 - what do you think?

liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
edited January 19, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
i was dropping off a co-worker at the airport on saturday morning, and these guys were cleaning windows. i asked if they minded me taking photos, they didn't, and i snapped away, until the cop asked me to move on!!

i like the comp, but its no too evocative for me.

any feedback appreciated.

cheers,
mark;)

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Mark

LiflanderPhotography.com

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    anonymouscubananonymouscuban Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 4,586 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2010
    Good but the angle bothers me. Might just be me though.
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    lizzard_nyclizzard_nyc Registered Users Posts: 4,056 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2010
    Liflander,
    I'm glad you are tackling this challenge it's definately not an easy one, not that any are, but this one really requires most to get outside their comfort zone. On to your shot.

    The tilt bothers me, especially for this challenge and as you said "not evocative", just two guys cleaning windowsne_nau.gif .

    Also I'd hold off on asking people to take their picture, they are usually not themselves after that and are putting on a show for the camera or the discomfort comes through. You might miss some genuine interactions.
    Liz A.
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    liflanderliflander Registered Users Posts: 339 Major grins
    edited January 19, 2010
    Thanks for the helpful comments. Back to the drawing board!
    Mark

    LiflanderPhotography.com
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