#45 last ditch effort - c&c please

AndMan · March 5, 2010

Since none of my previous attempts felt up to the challenge I went out yesterday to see if I could do better.

So the question is are any of these theme worthy?
All c&c greatly appreciated.

#1 "Niched" or "Worthy of Rememberance" v1

#2 "Niched" or "Worthy of Rememberance" v2

#3 A Part of a Grand Design

#4 Monumental Intent

#5 Designed for Posterity

#6 "18th Century Garden"

#7 Teamwork

WhatSheSaw · March 6, 2010

All great shots and I see where you are going with them. I think Teamwork really speaks to the theme.

Velvet-Art · March 6, 2010

Out of them all, #7 is more on-theme to my eyes anyway, but maybe a closer crop would look good, or at the least clone out the reed.

Tim

BinaryFx · March 6, 2010

I like #3 for being "apart" (I am also a sucker for mirrored symmetry of objects in a scene), perhaps some fill light to shadow/highlight to open up the shadows on the right hand building.

Stephen Marsh

http://members.ozemail.com.au/~binaryfx/
http://prepression.blogspot.com/

AndMan · March 6, 2010

WhatSheSaw wrote:

All great shots and I see where you are going with them. I think Teamwork really speaks to the theme.

Thanks for taking the time to provide your input I appreciate it.

AndMan · March 6, 2010

Velvet-Art wrote:

Out of them all, #7 is more on-theme to my eyes anyway, but maybe a closer crop would look good, or at the least clone out the reed.

Tim

Thanks for the suggestions Tim, I'll certainly give them a try.

AndMan · March 6, 2010

BinaryFx wrote:

I like #3 for being "apart" (I am also a sucker for mirrored symmetry of objects in a scene), perhaps some fill light to shadow/highlight to open up the shadows on the right hand building.

Stephen Marsh

http://members.ozemail.com.au/~binaryfx/
http://prepression.blogspot.com/

Thanks for the feedback Stephen, I did add some fill to the rh building but I'll see if I can get more.

VisualXpressions · March 6, 2010

teamwork, definitely

teamwork with some cropping and cloning out the cat tail.

AndMan · March 6, 2010

VisualXpressions wrote:

teamwork, definitely teamwork with some cropping and cloning out the cat tail.

Thanks for the feedback Winston.

AndMan · March 6, 2010

Two crop variations of Teamwork

#8 crop 1

#9 crop 2

bf2015 · March 6, 2010

#9 Crop 2. Great shot for this challenge!

tinamarie52 · March 6, 2010

I like #9 crop 2. What a long journey you've taken for this challenge!

I think you've arrived.

Chris

mr peas · March 7, 2010

I like the canoeing shot as well. I say it won't matter where you crop , but if you can show more sky, I say do that!

AndMan · March 7, 2010

bf2015 wrote:

#9 Crop 2. Great shot for this challenge!

Thanks for the feedback Brian.

AndMan · March 7, 2010

tinamarie52 wrote:

I like #9 crop 2. What a long journey you've taken for this challenge!

I think you've arrived.

Chris

Thanks for the feedback Chris.
I'm not so sure it was a journey, more a mad scramble for ideas & inspiration.

AndMan · March 7, 2010

mr peas wrote:

I like the canoeing shot as well. I say it won't matter where you crop , but if you can show more sky, I say do that!

Thanks for the feedback Joel.

mr peas · March 7, 2010

AndMan wrote:

Thanks for the feedback Joel.

DO IT

#45 last ditch effort - c&c please

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