Jennifer's portraits.

zoomer · October 25, 2010

Taken at a local park.
The rest of here gallery is here: http://alloutdoor.smugmug.com/Portrait-galleries/Jennys-portraits-by-All/14341041_Q79cC#1061811176_4Ut3L

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Nikolai · October 25, 2010

Great stuff, luvit!

Superb lighting in #4

My only nit is about the heels in #3, look like black bunny ears a bit...

zoomer · October 25, 2010

Thanks Nikolai,
Appreciate you having a look taking the time to leave a comment.
Three is actually my favorite of the ones I posted here, there are 60 more at her gallery.

ows4428 · October 25, 2010

I love all of these but #2 is my favorite. Sometimes simplicity works the best.

Wil Davis · October 25, 2010

#2 & #4 are good, but the others need careful consideration of thing like colours (#1, #5), and bits growing out of her head (#3). I think you should make the most of the fact that the girl is very photogenic. She needs to vary her expression a bit. She looks a bit nervous; shoot for an hour with her, throw everything away and start again; by that time she'll be used to the camera; good luck, very photogenic model!!

HTH -
-Wil

anonymouscuban · October 25, 2010

These are great Zoomer. Like them all. Very pretty girl. I love this location. I think you've used it before.

I don't like the bokeh in the last one but that's no biggie. Great job.

Qarik · October 25, 2010

nice set except for 3 and I agree the bokeh in the last one is distracting

zoomer · October 25, 2010

Thanks again everyone.
Three is my favorite even with the crown'o shoes

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That weird bokeh is a pond covered with lilly pads.

Qarik · October 25, 2010

it's not hhe bokeh per se, though it is a bit harsh looking..it is that the bokeh is the brightest thing in the image and my eyes draw away from her. lens?

anonymouscuban · October 25, 2010

qarik wrote: »

it's not hhe bokeh per se, though it is a bit harsh looking..it is that the bokeh is the brightest thing in the image and my eyes draw away from her. Lens?

+1

zoomer · October 26, 2010

Thanks again.
I darkened the background A LOT to get her skin to be the brightest part of the photo. I do see your point, need more spotlight on her.
Truth is I like the background so did not want to completely darken it up.

digidrone · October 26, 2010

#2 and #5 especially!
Some day....

Erbeman · October 26, 2010

I've seen a few of your posts in the post and visited your website and I'm so envious of you!! You manage to get some beautiful clients and the area that you live also looks amazing. Oh, great shots btw.

Jennifer's portraits.

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