Have to say I like this picture. Nice composition and use of negative space. Does seem to have just a tiny bit too much grain or granularity to it. But it works fine in it way and for me looks like an old image from a military history book. Have you given thought to working this one up using high key processing?
I think that would also look nice as well
Looks like a classic navy war shot from WWII, yet that class of sub is very modern. The grain does seem a little artificial looking. Not sure if it is too much grain, too big grain size, too little grain size. Or perhaps it is simply too uniform. As far as a creative effect, adding a stronger vignetting might make it feel as though we are looking through binoculars, or a periscope. Might make it feel more "navy-ish."
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I think that would also look nice as well
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