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  Onkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins

  July 20, 2012 edited July 20, 2012

  I'm not sure if the black and white conversion adds anything to the picture. Would like to see the color version.
  Do you have other shots from a lower angle, so there's a little sky on the picture ?

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  oldoval Registered Users Posts: 456 Major grins

  July 20, 2012 edited July 20, 2012

  Onkertje wrote: »

  I'm not sure if the black and white conversion adds anything to the picture. Would like to see the color version.
  Do you have other shots from a lower angle, so there's a little sky on the picture ?

  
  I do have other shots of this same scene.... color, with sky, without sky, etc. But those are not here for your consideration, only this one.

  Nate
  http://nathanwiley.smugmug.com/

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  Onkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins

  July 21, 2012 edited July 21, 2012

  I don't especially like this one.
  The water is placed in the center of the image.
  I can't see where it leads to.
  The tree is the only 'breaking' element in the picture. Happily it's there.
  
  You didn't attrack my attention with colors or teasing diagonal lines.
  You didn't use the rule of thirds.
  You don't make me curious to know what's not on the picture.
  
  That's why I asked if you didn't have any other pictures from the same shoot.

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  oldoval Registered Users Posts: 456 Major grins

  July 21, 2012 edited July 21, 2012

  If you don't like the image Onkertje, that's fine, thank you for the critisism. The image is composed exactly how I wanted.
  
  Don't however, ask "Got any other images I might like better"?

  Nate
  http://nathanwiley.smugmug.com/

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  Onkertje Registered Users Posts: 13 Big grins

  July 21, 2012 edited July 21, 2012

  I'll keep that in mind.

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