How would you finish this?

I've been trying to get this photo a while, it's not 100% perfect but it's all I can get.
How would you finish it?

This is what I tried:

Also, how should I brighten her eye on this one?

Thank you for reading
How would you finish it?

This is what I tried:

Also, how should I brighten her eye on this one?

Thank you for reading
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