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Model shoot
She asked for high fashion look similar to an Armani add. These are a few of the best from the shoot and that she liked. I was using to stand lights and an external camera flash. Please comment with constructive feed back.
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Armani ads seem to be B/W, but yours are color (or one B/W that seems overexposed) that are desaturated and possibly underexposed.
2 and 3 seem over exposed.
1 and 4 seem under exposed.
In 4, the attention goes to the male model, not the female model.
Overall, the poses are not very flattering to the model.
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16/2.8, f1.4G primes, f2.8 trio, 105/200 macro, SB900.
It never gets easier, you just get better.
2. two is a bit off (the color)
3. Not sure about the expressions and composition. It just doesn't strike me.
4. Wrong focus.... the girls should draw the attention.... but that is only my view.
I would appreciate bigger pictures, they are so small that they are hard to judge.
I didn't pose the model, I let her just do her thing since she had specific poses in her mind. She did like all 4 of these.
I agree 1 might be a touch under exposed but I tend towards darker photos.
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Could you be more specific about what you mean that color seams off on #2?
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#1 - appears underexposed in general, specifically where the black hair meets the black background
#2 - hair light seems way too hot and draws my attention there
#3 - the male model is way too too hot drawing me there and the dark shadow around his head
#4 - the male model head being the bright subject and that light tie pointing to his head never lets me see the female