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Earache · April 11, 2015

Interesting subject and moment Cristóbal... but the oof foreground bugs me on this one - that's just me though...
Also, is it a bit underexposed?

Juano · April 12, 2015

thanks Eric, I think you are right, I will try to boost the exposure a bit.

Juano · April 12, 2015

Here is a brighter version (also straighter...)

lensmole · April 12, 2015

Juano wrote: »

I like this shot and the foreground adds to the composition. An increase in exposure does not improve anything IMHO.

Earache · April 12, 2015

Juano wrote: »

Here is a brighter version (also straighter...)

Very much better I think Cristóbal!
The lifted shadows emphasize the whiter shirt and face and are tonally different from the foreground
such that I don't have any problem with it now.

Juano · April 12, 2015

Thanks for the comments Lensmole and Eric. I really like this one and your comments helped improve it.

Richard · April 14, 2015

I think the brighter version is an improvement.

black mamba · April 14, 2015

As you do, Cristóbal, I find this shot appealing. It's a bit of a strange scene and the partial obscurity of the subject enhances its allure. Job well done, my friend.

Take care,

Tom

Juano · April 14, 2015

Thanks Tom and Richard. As I said there's something about this shot that appeals to me, I like the complete concentration even in a busy surrounding. I think that the face on the back of the mirror gives this shot a retro feel as well.

CCoop · April 14, 2015

Nice. I like this a lot.

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Juano · April 15, 2015

CCoop wrote: »

Nice. I like this a lot.

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Thanks!

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