It is great the way it is. the subject placement is very pleasing and leads you into the skyline. It would have more impact if her face was more visible and b&w lends itself nicely to some Topaz filters.
It is great the way it is. the subject placement is very pleasing and leads you into the skyline. It would have more impact if her face was more visible and b&w lends itself nicely to some Topaz filters.
Thanks, unfortunately I don't have a copy of Topaz, I only have the NIK collection.
pretty strong image! I love teh overall compositions..but ditto on the face..wish I could see it. A few small issues..
1) the vignette is touch strong
2) there is some processing artifact on her extended arm..it has a strong halo
3) Also the extended arm is very dark compared the rest of her..almost look unatural..I would selectively give it some exposure.
pretty strong image! I love teh overall compositions..but ditto on the face..wish I could see it. A few small issues..
1) the vignette is touch strong
2) there is some processing artifact on her extended arm..it has a strong halo
3) Also the extended arm is very dark compared the rest of her..almost look unatural..I would selectively give it some exposure.
Working on the photo right now, fixing vignette, I don't see the halo on her arm! at least on mu screen!?, arm is fixed exposure is the same as the rest.
this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form! she was spinning, she wasn't posed as is.
I agree with the other comments. I would have selected a different location without the railing behind her.
Thanks for your input, but this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form! she was spinning, she wasn't posed as is.
fantastic shot.
I do wish her face was visible, and the pole wasn't sneaking a peak in front of her.
Thanks for your input, but this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form! she was spinning, she wasn't posed as is.
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Thanks, unfortunately I don't have a copy of Topaz, I only have the NIK collection.
I do wish her face was visible, and the pole wasn't sneaking a peak in front of her.
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Thanks for your input, okay fair enough.
1) the vignette is touch strong
2) there is some processing artifact on her extended arm..it has a strong halo
3) Also the extended arm is very dark compared the rest of her..almost look unatural..I would selectively give it some exposure.
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Working on the photo right now, fixing vignette, I don't see the halo on her arm! at least on mu screen!?, arm is fixed exposure is the same as the rest.
this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form!
Thanks for your input
Thanks for your input, but this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form!
Thanks for your input, but this was a impromptu shoot, I never met this girl and I just asked if I can snap away with a mobile model form!
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Thanks!