*Challenge 22: 'Beach Bike'
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F4, 1/200th, ISO 100, 28mm. Shot today on my daily walk on the beach. The wind was turbulent and kite surfers were abundant. Unfortunately none of the kite surfin' pics came out too decent.
Thoughts & Improvements kindly welcome. I cropped a lot to give the suggestion this person in the distance ditched their bike to go for a walk. In reality, there was a guy a few feet away admiring the surfers. :wink
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i really enjoy this shot. i hope you don't mind but i have some suggestions... i think this shot is a little flat, and could benefit from some increased contrast, and further adjustments.
in this step, i simply did a simple levels adjustment, bringing the right hand and left hand sliders in toward the center until i got the desired result:
then, i ran a velvia action (search google for "free velvia action") at 40%. i ran some noise reduction (fredmiranda's isox pro at 40% level) masking away the nr on the beach. finally, i applied a bit of usm to the bike and sand.
anyhow, i really like the shot, and thought it could benefit from a bit more "in-post." i would also like to see a snidge more scene lower right, but maybe there was compositional / cropping challenges?
how do you feel about these mods i made?
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And TML, thanks for the input as well. It's greatly appreciated. I was playin' with virtualPhotographer and I pulled the following image out. I like it's 'emotional' impact quite a bit. Any input on it?
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Andy's adjustments also brought out the colour of the water much better than the original. Still not sure how much "pop" I would personally want, but I definitely think the picture is a keeper, in colour of course:D
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As far as the PP, if anything I might bring out the colors a little bit, but maybe not as much as the first person did (IMHO).
Good work~~~~~
Personally, I like the color over the B&W. The color of the sky is what keeps me coming back to the photo for another look. Here are a few ideas for the shot if you want to give them a try.
Punch up the colors as Andy did using a layer mask so you can get the detail back in the bike when finished tweaking. I've only used this technique a few times, but I had great results using the tutorial Andy put together.
If you like the toned look better, try a sepia. Since this is an older bike, I think the sepia could give it a real classic look & feel. I just did this for a photo in the fredmiranda challenges & it didn't do well, so take my advice for what its worth...haha
Link to my dark sepia photo to give you an idea. Yours doesn't need to be this dark, but I punched mine up to get rid of the clutter in the background & help the streetcar stand out. It's a matter of preference.
Dave
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