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One more from Union Square

obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
edited December 22, 2004 in Landscapes
Sorry for another thread, but this photo was very well recieved elsewhere.

DSC_8094.jpg

Please let me know the good and the bad of this image.
Anand Sankaran

http://clix.smugmug.com

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    ubergeekubergeek Registered Users Posts: 99 Big grins
    edited December 17, 2004
    Nice!
    I like it. The repeating geometric patterns and the odd angle of the building make it somehow compelling. Is this a composite, or a single image?

    Cheers,
    Jeremy

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    obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2004
    ubergeek wrote:
    I like it. The repeating geometric patterns and the odd angle of the building make it somehow compelling. Is this a composite, or a single image?

    Cheers,
    Jeremy
    Thanks Jeremy, it is a single image.
    Anand Sankaran

    http://clix.smugmug.com
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    NirNir Registered Users Posts: 1,400 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    Very interesting shot! I like it!

    Perhaps exposing for the shadows on the left and bringing out more details from the building could improve it.
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    obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    Nir wrote:
    Very interesting shot! I like it!

    Perhaps exposing for the shadows on the left and bringing out more details from the building could improve it.
    Some thing like this?

    fmDec.jpg

    Thanks for your comments.
    Anand Sankaran

    http://clix.smugmug.com
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    dkappdkapp Registered Users Posts: 985 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    obelix wrote:
    Some thing like this?

    fmDec.jpg

    Thanks for your comments.

    This looks great. What did you do different?

    Dave
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    obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2004
    dkapp wrote:
    This looks great. What did you do different?

    Dave
    - Adjusted exposure to +0.7 EV
    - Raised shadows and highlights (not sure about midtones)

    Very interesting shot to play with.
    Anand Sankaran

    http://clix.smugmug.com
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    BryanBryan Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2004
    The one thing that kind of grabbed me was that the angle was odd. I don't know how to explaine it so I played with your picture a little. I hope you do not mind.

    Here is the original, see the red line points out the odd angle, I like it, but it just was off from the 30, 45, 60, 90 of my geometric mind...

    13018989-M.jpg

    So I rotated the picture a bit and then had to crop it to fill the frame...

    I do not know if it is any better, makes the building fell like it is falling into the picture more, which is not a warm fuzzy feeling.

    13018990-M.jpg

    Interesting to play with, you have a great shot! so many ways to tweek it, I would love to live there and have a chance to shoot it many different ways, the new and old archicture, lines and angles, great material to work with.

    Thanks for the showing us!
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    obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2004
    Very interesting take on it Bryan, I liked what you did.

    Yeah, San Francisco is a wonderful place :)
    Anand Sankaran

    http://clix.smugmug.com
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    dkappdkapp Registered Users Posts: 985 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2004
    When I first saw this photo, it looked like lattice work, not another building :D

    It took a little while before I figured out that it was actually another building w/ the sky reflection in the window.

    Dave
    http://analog.lifekapptured.com (photoblog)
    http://www.lifekapptured.com (gallery)
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