LPS#5 - Heeeeeelp!

pemmettpemmett Registered Users Posts: 507 Major grins
edited May 10, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
Are any of these interesting enough to enter? :dunno

Please help....

#1
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#2
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#3
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#4
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Thanks for all and any feedback ...
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  • BistiArtBistiArt Registered Users Posts: 307 Major grins
    edited May 6, 2007
    #2 v Its Bright Background
    pemmett wrote:
    Are any of these interesting enough to enter? ne_nau.gif
    Thanks for all and any feedback ...

    #2 shows promise...

    Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

    Would some burning be more appropriate?
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  • pemmettpemmett Registered Users Posts: 507 Major grins
    edited May 6, 2007
    BistiArt wrote:
    #2 shows promise...

    Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

    Would some burning be more appropriate?

    Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately the RAW file is also pretty bright where the sun was, so there's not a lot I can do - except shoot it again of course :-)

    Cheers/peter
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  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited May 6, 2007
    Can you try brightening the background on #1? headscratch.gif That would give a silhouette effect.

    Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

    The other two don't really hit the mark for me.
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited May 6, 2007
    I think #1 is the only that qualifies for the theme
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  • pemmettpemmett Registered Users Posts: 507 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2007
    richtersl wrote:
    Can you try brightening the background on #1? headscratch.gif That would give a silhouette effect.

    Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

    The other two don't really hit the mark for me.

    Linda/PyroPrints,

    Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

    #1
    488229951_c7b903dd57_o.jpg

    #2
    488225234_4909572fd6_o.jpg
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  • Tessa HDTessa HD Registered Users Posts: 852 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2007
    lps#5
    Out of these two, I prefer #2! What a sweet face!

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  • cabbeycabbey Registered Users Posts: 1,053 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    pemmett wrote:
    Do you think that these two work?

    nod.gif

    Both are gorgeous shots. I think I'd probably go for #1 myself, 'cause I just love the colors in it. Especially the glow that highlights her chin.
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    pemmett wrote:
    Linda/PyroPrints,

    Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

    #1

    #2

    Both are gorgous shots. But #1 fits the theme better. Very nice!
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