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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 18, 2007
    I am just overflowing with joy and pride for my -!-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 18, 2007
    I feel so... so.... connected to everyone here, thanks to -!-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 18, 2007
    8x10 prints for sale for $75 each-

    color prints for $100-

    signed, $150-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 18, 2007
    should I center it, or put it into the thirds?-
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    AndyAndy Registered Users Posts: 50,016 Major grins
    edited December 18, 2007
    gefillmore wrote:
    should I center it, or put it into the thirds?-
    :rutt :rutt :rutt
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    gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited December 18, 2007
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 18, 2007
    gus wrote:
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    heavy baby-
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    ElaineElaine Registered Users Posts: 3,532 Major grins
    edited December 18, 2007
    gefillmore wrote:
    heavy baby-

    rolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gif
    Elaine

    Comments and constructive critique always welcome!

    Elaine Heasley Photography
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    pyrtekpyrtek Registered Users Posts: 539 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    gefillmore wrote:
    I have returned to my former user title in anticipation of my photo title change-

    :cry
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    NeilLNeilL Registered Users Posts: 4,201 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    George, it's so, well... iconic! Can you post the exif, please?
    "Snow. Ice. Slow!" "Half-winter. Half-moon. Half-asleep!"

    http://www.behance.net/brosepix
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    urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
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    (the artist formerly known as george)
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    schmooschmoo Registered Users Posts: 8,468 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    urbanaries wrote:
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    (the artist formerly known as george)

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    AndyAndy Registered Users Posts: 50,016 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    pyrtek wrote:
    It has the potential, but the moderators will ruin it. They've already started.
    Too bad.
    I think that your comment is ruining it :) Lighten up, pyrtek, it's the Holidays wave.gif
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    FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    gefillmore wrote:
    should I center it, or put it into the thirds?-
    Well, since you asked, George, I do have some suggestions that might make your hypen a stronger image.

    Don't get me wrong, I think it is a wonderful conceptual piece and I am so glad you posted it. Somehow, though, I'm not sure why, it doesn't elicit an emotional reponse in me (unless you count uncontrolled giggling and occasional laughing out loud). Without that - well, I'm not sure I can fully appreciate your work.

    So here is my -2 cents worth.

    First, for this work, I recommend a ramblin' hypen. I don't think that the placement of the hypen on the canvas is too important. Obviously you want to be sure it contrasts adequately with the background color and you don't want it hidden in the corners, but otherwise, it seems to me that you can move it around at will without ruining the impact.

    The black and white conversion seems a bit flat to me. I'm wondering if the hypen doesn't need a little pop. You can get some great suggestions on how to do that in this tutorial.

    You might also want to experiment with hypen-heavy a la Gus. If the hypen gets big enough, you can add noise to give the work a true gf signature feel. (Of course, if gf has now become a hypen, that would be redundant.)

    Have you tried oversharpening and oversaturating a color version of the hypen? Just a thought, but it might be interesting and give the hypen more of an emotional impact for the viewer.

    Finally, consider reshooting with your fisheye lens. This would change the hypen to a grin.

    Thanks for the post, George. It made my week.

    Happy Holidays!

    Virginia
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    for those of you that would try to create your own hyphen, just use a dash of this and a dash of that-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    pyrtek wrote:
    :cry

    sorry bernard-

    all good things must end-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    NeilL wrote:
    George, it's so, well... iconic! Can you post the exif, please?

    thanks neil-

    I really don't want to reveal all the secrets to the hyphen-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    urbanaries wrote:
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    (the artist formerly known as george)


    yeah-

    prince's lawyer has already contacted my lawyer about copyright and trademark infringement-
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    urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    gefillmore wrote:
    for those of you that would try to create your own hyphen, just use a dash of this and a dash of that-

    rolleyes1.gif I just snorted my coffee, thanks -
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    ST-E2 Transmitter + (3) 580 EXII + radio poppers
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    Flyinggina wrote:
    Well, since you asked, George, I do have some suggestions that might make your hypen a stronger image.

    Don't get me wrong, I think it is a wonderful conceptual piece and I am so glad you posted it. Somehow, though, I'm not sure why, it doesn't elicit an emotional reponse in me (unless you count uncontrolled giggling and occasional laughing out loud). Without that - well, I'm not sure I can fully appreciate your work.

    So here is my -2 cents worth.

    First, for this work, I recommend a ramblin' hypen. I don't think that the placement of the hypen on the canvas is too important. Obviously you want to be sure it contrasts adequately with the background color and you don't want it hidden in the corners, but otherwise, it seems to me that you can move it around at will without ruining the impact.

    The black and white conversion seems a bit flat to me. I'm wondering if the hypen doesn't need a little pop. You can get some great suggestions on how to do that in this tutorial.

    You might also want to experiment with hypen-heavy a la Gus. If the hypen gets big enough, you can add noise to give the work a true gf signature feel. (Of course, if gf has now become a hypen, that would be redundant.)

    Have you tried oversharpening and oversaturating a color version of the hypen? Just a thought, but it might be interesting and give the hypen more of an emotional impact for the viewer.

    Finally, consider reshooting with your fisheye lens. This would change the hypen to a grin.

    Thanks for the post, George. It made my week.

    Happy Holidays!

    Virginia


    gee gina, after all the work I already put into it?-

    I dunno-

    but thanks; something to ponder on-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    Andy wrote:
    I think that your comment is ruining it :) Lighten up, pyrtek, it's the Holidays wave.gif

    hah!-

    bernard's ok; he keeps me grounded-
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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited December 19, 2007
    Merry Christmas everyone (and Happy Hanukkah, too) (and peace and good-will to all others)-

    please be careful this season as you go 'dashing through the snow'-
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    jeffreaux2jeffreaux2 Registered Users Posts: 4,762 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2007
    I think it is underexposed.....have you tried posting thius in the " finishing school" orylsuper.gif " whipping post"? Just a thought. You might get a better response there.


    Oh.....and....


    Merry Christmas!:jose
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