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KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
edited September 14, 2008 in Weddings
Can someone help me fix this photo? The couple wants this one, but I am not happy with it yet. I would really appreciate it :D

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~Katie~
:barb

http://www.kc1stphotography.com


2 Canon Rebel XSi
Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
2 Canon 14-55mm
Canon 55-250mm f4.0
Canon 580EX
Canon 580EX II

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    KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    Oh, ya... I do know that the M is cut off of Married
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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    SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    If I could have access to the original RAW file......I'd be happy to give you a couple versions :D
    Swartzy:
    NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
    Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
    www.daveswartz.com
    Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
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    KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2008
    Swartzy wrote:
    If I could have access to the original RAW file......I'd be happy to give you a couple versions :D

    How do I give you the original RAW?
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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    SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    Hmm...maybe Scott or Richard can give us a way to do this....others in the past have put them in their SmugMug gallery (private) then provided a link. I downloaded what is here as a JPeg and is too difficult to work with. The whites are completly blown out as there is no information on the back of her dress and sky. A RAW file will allow to recover "some" of it as well as making adjustments in a non-destructive edit.

    I would suggest (and it's only my suggestion) to convert this to B&W or Sepia or desaturated look, crop the image and eliminate all that sky above the carraige as it does nothing for the composition. The bright triangle on the back is a major distraction. Do you have any with them "in" the carraige?
    Swartzy:
    NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
    Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
    www.daveswartz.com
    Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
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    VanquizVanquiz Registered Users Posts: 199 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    How do I give you the original RAW?
    You can upload it to a file hosting site like megaupload or rapidshare, and post the link here so people can download the RAW

    I played with your image a bit in rush, so pardon the mess here and there, just want to give you a bit idea

    img2042mj7.jpg
    img20422vf0.jpg
    img20423eq0.jpg
    img_2042-4782.jpg
    img2042uq3.jpg
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    ChatKatChatKat Registered Users Posts: 1,357 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    More cropping needed
    I'd crop it down...371396314_mQRYi-M.jpg
    Kathy Rappaport
    Flash Frozen Photography, Inc.
    http://flashfrozenphotography.com
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    hockeytown74hockeytown74 Registered Users Posts: 163 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    Here is my attemp.


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    Nikon D800, 70-200mm f2.8 VRII, 85mm f1.8G, 35mm f1.8g

    http://www.hockeytown.smugmug.com/
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    KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    Wow, thanks everyone. I just went through my files and found one that was a lot better.... I know the cars are distracting too, but it is what it is....

    371298838_gNKGp-M.jpg
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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    i_worship_the_Kingi_worship_the_King Registered Users Posts: 548 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    did you use a plug-in to generate that sky or is it the real deal?
    I make it policy to never let ignorance stand in the way of my opinion. ~Justiceiro

    "Your decisions on whether to buy, when to buy and what to buy should depend on careful consideration of your needs primarily, with a little of your wants thrown in for enjoyment, After all photography is a hobby, even for pros."
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    david_hdavid_h Registered Users Posts: 463 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    Not sure why they would want to have a picture of the groom's back and the horses arse. But heck, the customer is always right!

    If I was confronted with this, I'd make it arty farty like this:

    371673202_D4Dy2-L.jpg

    If nothing else, the horses arse is blured out.
    ____________
    Cheers!
    David
    www.uniqueday.com
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    KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    did you use a plug-in to generate that sky or is it the real deal?

    That is the real deal. No editing done to that photo
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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    Clickr_GrlClickr_Grl Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
    edited September 13, 2008
    That is the real deal. No editing done to that photo

    Well, I definately agree with the cropping. The sky is beautiful, I just think there's too much of it. I like the second photo you posted with the kids. Maybe clone out the cars?
    I usually despise sepia, but it does work here just because it has that feeling.
    Another thing, if the couple doesn't want the kids in the shot, why not crop from that one in order to get all of the "just Married" sign?

    Try a few different things with it. Nice shot though!
    Great work and tons of feedback here for you!thumb.gif
    :barb
    I am Mine!
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    KTBoom2006-E510KTBoom2006-E510 Registered Users Posts: 437 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2008
    Vanquiz wrote:
    You can upload it to a file hosting site like megaupload or rapidshare, and post the link here so people can download the RAW

    I played with your image a bit in rush, so pardon the mess here and there, just want to give you a bit idea

    img2042mj7.jpg
    img20422vf0.jpg
    img20423eq0.jpg
    img_2042-4782.jpg
    img2042uq3.jpg

    How did you get that kind of look to the picture?
    ~Katie~
    :barb

    http://www.kc1stphotography.com


    2 Canon Rebel XSi
    Tamron 70-200mm f2.8
    2 Canon 14-55mm
    Canon 55-250mm f4.0
    Canon 580EX
    Canon 580EX II
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    VanquizVanquiz Registered Users Posts: 199 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2008
    How did you get that kind of look to the picture?

    Im not exactly sure which kind of look that you meant, but basically what I did is just add some cloud, play with the curve, contrast, saturation, and I created some different examples with Lightroom using some plugins collections that I have.
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    SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2008
    Glad to see so many participate in this.....just got back....no time this weekend...sorry. I honestly prefer David H's rendition. This shot is what it is but the artsy processing actually tells a story. The other versions simply look like a hit or miss attempt at salvaging. Just my two cents.
    Swartzy:
    NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
    Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
    www.daveswartz.com
    Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
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