More tilt and probably square 1:1 crop with more balloon and less sky would help, too, what do you think?
I agree. More of a tilt would have improved the shot. I kind of like the expanse of sky though. Kind of gives the shot a certain feeling... a sense of solitude maybe?
This was a passing shot I took as I was walking. I happened to look up and remembered the Tilt assignment so I snap a shot. Need to remind myself to take more shots instead of less... not like I need to preserve film or anything.
Here's another shot I just took... better?