DSS#49 Unofficial Feedback Thread (WTH is that![a close-up identification challenge])

bf2015bf2015 Registered Users Posts: 523 Major grins
edited May 8, 2010 in The Dgrin Challenges
So, here is the official gallery to give your C&C for DSS#49

Gallery Here...

Once more into the fray. This unofficial feedback thread is a catch-all of sorts, lets make it happen

Anyway, let's start feedback on DSS #49!!


This thread is:
  • a place to post a list of your top ten favorites. (be heard, and let everyone know what images moved you.)
    a place to post your "the making of my image"
    a place to ask someone "how did they do that?"(for us all to see )
Feedback is an important part of the photographic process. While those selected as finalists get feedback from the judges and those who vote, others are never quite sure where they stand. So share your thoughts both in this thread and with comments in the actual gallery. Constructive criticism should always be welcome.

It's easy to post thumbnails (with help from our Moderator).

With the image selected in the gallery, copy its URL from your browser, add "-Th.jpg" to the end, delete the jumble of numbers and letters preceding the hashtag (#), change "gallery" to "photos" and that's it.

Example

Change this url
http://challenges.smugmug.com/Other/DSS-44/11173146_XPbWE#784726765_MXFDd

To this (minus the space in the IMG tags)
http://challenges.smugmug.com/photos/784726765_MXFDd-Th.jpg

Happy Feedbacking
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  • HoofClixHoofClix Registered Users Posts: 1,156 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Well, I'll just say "great round" this time. I can't see a loser in the gallery...
    Mark
    www.HoofClix.com / Personal Facebook / Facebook Page
    and I do believe its true.. that there are roads left in both of our shoes..
  • JAGJAG Super Moderators Posts: 9,088 moderator
    edited May 3, 2010
    Some really outstanding images in there but I am only giving a top five for the moment as my time is short. In no particular order. ...
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    Also here is my image...are you curious to what it is? It is a thinly sliced banana with one useless seed. If you ever saw a seed of a banana close up this is what you actually eat. I had the banana slice layed on top of my white polyurithane cutting board with my SB800 flash undernieth it. I was excited that the colors and textures came out so well!

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  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    JAG! I was wondering! my guess was petrified amber resin with a seed.
    good jobthumb.gif
    Aaron Nelson
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    too many favorites this round for me to even try to C&C.....
    Aaron Nelson
  • Velvet-ArtVelvet-Art Registered Users Posts: 292 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Well I have to say that there are some absolutely outstanding images in this round, and very hard to cut down to 10 faves.

    But some of those that stood out to me are;

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    851093105_bt8bU-Th.jpg854657044_rbMdc-Th.jpg855046567_xiFX5-Th.jpg846108837_Q67Pz-Th.jpg


    As many of you know, my "Alien Cave" is a macro shot of the top of a grape where the stalk has been pulled out.


    Tim
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    too many favorites this round for me to even try to C&C.....

    Don't you always say that??? ne_nau.gif :pokemwink.gif
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    JAG wrote: »
    Also here is my image...are you curious to what it is? It is a thinly sliced banana with one useless seed. If you ever saw a seed of a banana close up this is what you actually eat. I had the banana slice layed on top of my white polyurithane cutting board with my SB800 flash undernieth it. I was excited that the colors and textures came out so well!

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    All I could think of was ancient food stuck to a high up surface rolleyes1.gif
  • nightpixelsnightpixels Registered Users Posts: 536 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Some truly beautiful images this round. I think this round more than any other deserves this thread. We are all eagerly waiting to find out what each and every entry is and how they were shot so I will go ahead and do my part for my entry, "Curves":


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    In short, those are white printing papers. The reason they look goldish in my image is because I used a gold gel on my flash when I lit them. In order to create the curves, I ended up sticking pens between the sheets of papers and started playing with the positions of the pens to create a shape that I was happy with the most. I am using Pocketwizard's FlexTT5 traceivers to fire the flash remotely. The gel is located inside the diffusing dome. In case you are wondering why I am covering the flash with a sock-like shield is because Pocketwizard's latest radio triggers have radio frequency interference issues with the Canon 580EX II flashes, so if you buy these radio triggers now, they will come with these shields (called AC5 shields) that you need to use to cover your 580EX II flashes with in order to reduce these interferences, otherwise you will get a lot of misfires. These are my setup shots:

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    Looking forward to reading about how you shot yours and finding out what they really are.
    Allen Parseghian

    Los Angeles dance photographer

    Website: http://www.allenparseghian.com
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    sherstone wrote: »
    Don't you always say that??? ne_nau.gif :pokemwink.gif

    no, thats a entirely new excuse
    Aaron Nelson
  • wats005wats005 Registered Users Posts: 42 Big grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    nightpixels- as always your shots amaze me on how they come out- it is my top pick by far.

    For those of you who did not know what mine was, it was a sugargum tree pod. These little spiky balls that litter my yard every year!
    Erica

    Still Learning.......
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I think this round more than any other deserves this thread. We are all eagerly waiting to find out what each and every entry is and how they were shot so I will go ahead and do my part for my entry, "Curves":
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    I was pretty sure that this was the edge of a book. I am impressed with your creativity with the pens! It's so cool when your setup was almost exactly like how I envisioned it to be... sans pens. thumb.gif
  • nightpixelsnightpixels Registered Users Posts: 536 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    wats005 wrote: »
    nightpixels- as always your shots amaze me on how they come out- it is my top pick by far.

    For those of you who did not know what mine was, it was a sugargum tree pod. These little spiky balls that litter my yard every year!

    Thank you wats! I really like your entry too.
    Allen Parseghian

    Los Angeles dance photographer

    Website: http://www.allenparseghian.com
  • nightpixelsnightpixels Registered Users Posts: 536 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    sherstone wrote: »
    I was pretty sure that this was the edge of a book. I am impressed with your creativity with the pens! It's so cool when your setup was almost exactly like how I envisioned it to be... sans pens. thumb.gif

    I was definitely going to go with a book first, as a matter of fact, I did, but then the text started to bother me. I did not want any text to show on the sheets, so I switched gears and went with blank sheet of printing papers.
    Allen Parseghian

    Los Angeles dance photographer

    Website: http://www.allenparseghian.com
  • BSGreenBSGreen Registered Users Posts: 27 Big grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Excellent job everyone! Fantastic entries, feel sorry for the judges :) Some of the ones I thought were very well composed and were really on point for the WTH? part of this challenge:

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    My first challenge here and I have to say it was fun. Thanks to all who commented on my ideas thread and gallery. Later today I'll post a non-macro shot of my entry :) Good luck to everyone!
  • BSGreenBSGreen Registered Users Posts: 27 Big grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    "Curves":
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    Thought it was pages or paper but couldn't think of how it was done - the separations just flow so well; so I thought maybe a part of sculpture or something. Thanks for showing the setup
  • Velvet-ArtVelvet-Art Registered Users Posts: 292 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I thought I would post up a setup shot of how I got my "Alien Cave", I did post it up in an earlier thread ( my dss#49 c&c thread ) but I guess it is appropriate to post it up here too.

    Anywho, here it is,

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    You can see the grape in the bottom right or the picture. It was stuck on to a pin that was itself stuck with a lump of blutack onto the top of a jamjar. You might just be able to make out the pin just in front of the lens.

    Just to the right of the jamjar you can see my home-made lighting, a set of 3 high-powered LED's ( 3 one-watt LED's ) that I arranged close to the grape and then I used a A5 sized white envelope on the other side to serve as a reflector.

    As you can see I mounted my 7d on the tripod, attached a Eos-to-M42 adaptor, then the bellows and the extension tubes and finally an old 50mm f1.8 M42 lens.

    Focus was initially found by moving the jamjar ( holding the grape ) back and forth until I got some of the grape in focus. ( Using live view, I love having live-view, such a life-saver for macro) Then I used the focus on the lens to focus on the nearest ( to the lens ) focal point, and then took a total of 11 frames working my way backwards to the farthest focal point.

    Then I combined all the frames using CombineZP, opened the resulting image in Photoshop Elements and just cropped, added a little usm contrast and a little usm sharpening.


    Tim
  • bf2015bf2015 Registered Users Posts: 523 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Some have asked how I did my shot "Before The Big Bang".

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    First...I DO NOT condone looking down the barrel of a loaded gun, and am not responsible if somebody does. deal.gif

    :D

    Now that that's out of the way...

    It is a Glock G27 (.40cal)

    To make the shooting process safe, I removed the recoil spring so there was no way the slide would retract and chamber a round.

    This is the setup I used (camera on my phone since I have only one digital camera)...

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    With the slide locked open and the clip loaded, the light reflected off the brass of the bullet and produced a nice "copper" light all the way down the barrel.

    I used a low f-stop and took several shots at different focal planes so that I had every inch of the gun in focus. Then it was just a matter of focus stacking the images (I used PhotoAcute for that). Because of the "geometry correction" of the stacking, it placed the bullet dead center in the barrel (no pun intended rolleyes1.gif). The hardest part of the shoot was getting the camera centered and looking straight down the barrel.

    The only thing I did in PS was add a slight Surface Blur to soften things up and then cropped.

    Thanks for all the wonderful comments. It turned out way better than I thought it would.
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Entry titles
    I just wanted to pop in and say how impressed I was this round with the artist's choice of titles.
    Great imagination and way to enhance your image! clap.gif
  • HoofClixHoofClix Registered Users Posts: 1,156 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Allen, nice setup you have there for your entry "Curves".. I correctly guessed it was paper, but had no idea how you made it stay still enough to be shot so clearly. Nice job.. I see you have a Pocketwizard... I pondered one, but I just recieved today my Nikon SU800 Flash Commander, and have already enjoyed what it allows me to do. Of course all I need now is to spend lots more money on more flash units but oh well.....
    Mark
    www.HoofClix.com / Personal Facebook / Facebook Page
    and I do believe its true.. that there are roads left in both of our shoes..
  • CaiusMartiusCaiusMartius Registered Users Posts: 136 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Sticking to Challenge Themes
    I know that this will be viewed as a sour grapes post, but I have to get this off my chest. If we have a theme, shouldn't we adhere to it? This isn't the first time I have seen a beautiful picture selected that is clearly not to theme.

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    This photo is not only recognizeable, but it is iconic. It is a gorgeous photo taken by a talented photographer, but it just doesn't fit the "What the Heck" theme in any way.
    http://bedford.smugmug.com
    Gear: Canon 7D
    Canon 24-105 f/4 L
    Canon 28mm f/1.8
    Tamron 17-50 f/2.8
  • CaiusMartiusCaiusMartius Registered Users Posts: 136 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
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    Still very curious to find out what this was. (My personal favorite.)
    http://bedford.smugmug.com
    Gear: Canon 7D
    Canon 24-105 f/4 L
    Canon 28mm f/1.8
    Tamron 17-50 f/2.8
  • nightpixelsnightpixels Registered Users Posts: 536 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    HoofClix wrote: »
    Allen, nice setup you have there for your entry "Curves".. I correctly guessed it was paper, but had no idea how you made it stay still enough to be shot so clearly. Nice job.. I see you have a Pocketwizard... I pondered one, but I just recieved today my Nikon SU800 Flash Commander, and have already enjoyed what it allows me to do. Of course all I need now is to spend lots more money on more flash units but oh well.....

    Hi Mark,

    I'm sure it will be a great investment for you. It's so awesome the kinds of things they allow you to do, but as you said it means ordering more flash units which I had to do, heh! What I like about Pocketwizard's latest release is, you are no longer limited to sync speeds up to 1/200 sec anymore, you can go as high as your camera shutter speed allows you to go. This is so great in situations where you are trying to overpower the sun while keeping a wide open aperture for a shallow depth of field.

    Thank you for your comment.
    Allen Parseghian

    Los Angeles dance photographer

    Website: http://www.allenparseghian.com
  • wats005wats005 Registered Users Posts: 42 Big grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I hate to add to this as well, but I echo this thought. It was the first thing I thought as well when looking at a few in the gallery. I know that sherstone (I think sorry if I mis remember) reminded us a while ago that we need to stick to the theme. That being said, each judge has thier own interpretation and there were so many great imaginative entries this time.
    Erica

    Still Learning.......
  • Velvet-ArtVelvet-Art Registered Users Posts: 292 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I know that this will be viewed as a sour grapes post, but I have to get this off my chest. If we have a theme, shouldn't we adhere to it? This isn't the first time I have seen a beautiful picture selected that is clearly not to theme.

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    This photo is not only recognizeable, but it is iconic. It is a gorgeous photo taken by a talented photographer, but it just doesn't fit the "What the Heck" theme in any way.

    Well there's at least 4-5 images in the gallery that are easily recognisable, not just the one you have singled out. But what you have to remember is that there is no explicit direction given to the judges, nor should there be, IMO. Therefore there will always be a strong element of personal opinion by the judges in their choices.

    This means that in every round there will be shots that get chosen to go through to the final that some of us may think are not theme-worthy, but you have to assume that the judge/s that chose them thought that they were enough on-theme and liked them enough to put them through.

    If you arent happy about that, put your name down to be a guest judge ( or if you are fortunate enough to win a challenge ) and then you can judge a challenge to exactly the standards you set yourself.

    It wasnt until I judged one of these challenges that I realised that it is not as easy as I once thought. What I mean to say, there may be more to the choices of the judges than meets the eye, and picking on just one photo is a bit harsh on the photographer who submitted that photo. There was more than one easily identifiable ( to me ) shot that got through to the voting round.

    There is nothing against the rules about submitting a photo that is not "perfectly" on theme, and nothing against the rules for the judges to pick such a shot.


    Just the ramblings of a semi-deranged fool with a camera:D


    Tim
  • wats005wats005 Registered Users Posts: 42 Big grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Just the ramblings of a semi-deranged fool with a camera:D


    Tim[/QUOTE]
    aren't we all?
    :D

    I understand where you are coming from and you are right, there was more than one easily recognizeable, and right again on it is the judges call.
    Erica

    Still Learning.......
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I know that this will be viewed as a sour grapes post, but I have to get this off my chest. If we have a theme, shouldn't we adhere to it? This isn't the first time I have seen a beautiful picture selected that is clearly not to theme.

    854657044_rbMdc-Th.jpg

    This photo is not only recognizeable, but it is iconic. It is a gorgeous photo taken by a talented photographer, but it just doesn't fit the "What the Heck" theme in any way.

    "It happens", I think we all have said WTH about a entry or two,,, heck Ive seen winners that I wouldn't put in the top 40, we all see it different, my only advice for you is that you need to remember that the artist thinks it is theme worthy. If you dont like any specific image its your choice not too...

    but IMHO this qualifies as "close-up"... and "WTH".... i didnt just look at it for its face value....
    Aaron Nelson
  • TangoTango Registered Users Posts: 4,592 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010

    In short, those are white printing papers. The reason they look goldish in my image is because I used a gold gel on my flash when I lit them.

    and that was the icingthumb.gif not to mention the clarity.
    Aaron Nelson
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    I know that this will be viewed as a sour grapes post, but I have to get this off my chest. If we have a theme, shouldn't we adhere to it? This isn't the first time I have seen a beautiful picture selected that is clearly not to theme.

    854657044_rbMdc-20x20.jpg

    This photo is not only recognizeable, but it is iconic. It is a gorgeous photo taken by a talented photographer, but it just doesn't fit the "What the Heck" theme in any way.

    Thank you CaiusMartius for giving us your feedback and opinion. I am really glad that you prefaced your thoughts, explaining that you liked it and feel it is an iconic image, because I feel that this is probably the very reason why the judge that picked it had an emotional reaction to it.

    Photography is all about creating a 2D image that captures a fraction of time. That capture hopefully instills some sort of emotional reaction. The reaction can be positive or negative. Normally it is the most positive or negative emotional images that will stick in your head or cause you to have some sort of memory that brings back smells, images, etc....

    In essence you have actually given the photographer much more by commenting, you have explained that you didn't feel it met your interpretation of the theme and at the same time have put the image up on a pedestal saying that it is such a good photo that you felt it was iconic.

    Now on to theme worthiness;

    If you remember or read in the challenge thread itself, I mentioned several times that it was up to the individual artist to choose how close or how unrecognizable the image should be. I also mentioned that it was up to the artist to find a way to instill the theme on the two judges. How you do that is an artistic decision.

    The themes are a starting point, they are not meant to be an exact science.
    sherstone wrote: »
    If I said you must all shoot a red shoe from the side only using one light positioned exactly 1 foot high and 45 degrees from perpendicular plus your F-stop must be F8 and shutter speed 1/125 of a second.
    We would all know exactly what was expected but the challenge would be pretty boring.

    Hence the reason every round will have images that a judge connects with and feels they are theme worthy regardless how anyone else views it.

    This is also why we have an ongoing "blind judges" joke. thumb.gif Even as a judge myself I am 100% sure I have picked images that everyone else has said WTH?????
  • SmithySmithy Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    sherstone wrote: »

    The themes are a starting point, they are not meant to be an exact science.


    What's troubling to me, is the attitude that "whatever the judges feel" is more correct than the guidelines people work hard to try and fulfill. You may have the right to be 100% subjective in interpreting people's art, but don't for a moment act surprised when artists who try to play by the rules get discouraged when those rules get tossed out the window.
    Fuji X-S10
    Fujifilm Finepix S100fs

    and my other hobby... tidewaterforge.com
  • nightpixelsnightpixels Registered Users Posts: 536 Major grins
    edited May 3, 2010
    Smithy wrote: »
    What's troubling to me, is the attitude that "whatever the judges feel" is more correct than the guidelines people work hard to try and fulfill. You may have the right to be 100% subjective in interpreting people's art, but don't for a moment act surprised when artists who try to play by the rules get discouraged when those rules get tossed out the window.

    Well, one solution is to completely eliminate the judging all together and just post all the entries up for voting just like the way they are doing it over on the "people" board. I for one do not understand why we can't do this except for the fact that it will create a lot of work for the moderator (Sean in this case) to list all those entries for voting. There are times that some great entries don't even make the voting rounds, entries that I strongly believe would have finished top 5, had they made it. I can also see the "drama" that judging can create which can be viewed as exciting by some people.
    Allen Parseghian

    Los Angeles dance photographer

    Website: http://www.allenparseghian.com
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