Standing Guard
First I know that the trigger finger is on the trigger and it was done on purpose.
Had a wonderful shoot with this strong lady.
Bailey-20160718_DSC1027.jpg by tinstafl, on Flickr
Had a wonderful shoot with this strong lady.
Bailey-20160718_DSC1027.jpg by tinstafl, on Flickr
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No real person, handling this firearm, would ever rest their finger on the trigger in this situation (or any other)... it is neither ergonomic nor practical... it just isn't done, except by models and the foolhardy.
Regarding the image...
For me, the overall lighting is too harsh and the lighting on the face - fill-flash, dodging, reflector, however it was done - looks unnatural and out-of-sync with the light and shadow on the other parts of the model.
The subject seems oddly placed in-frame.. rather low, and the high camera position compresses (shortens) the model... this also seems out-of-context with the theme of "warrior" or "strong lady".
jmo
Edit: I'm sorry if the feedback offered comes-off as pointed or terse, but, I am reminded of a comment made some time ago by The Anonymous Cuban... something to the effect that it
is useless from a learning point-of-view, if comments consist of nothing but flattery... I wish the OP would return to the thread and have a constructive conversation, so that we all might benefit.
In general (with a few exceptions), there seems to be no appetite these days, for constructive give-and-take on DGrin... a loss, imo...
An "accurate" reproduction of a scene and a good photograph are often two different things.
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