Cool apocalyptic reflection. You might want to play around with the crop some to try to make it more ambiguous. If try eliminating the dark patch on the left edge and maybe even the Elara sign on the right. That way, it would be less clear that we're seeing a distorted reflection. Just a thought.
I prefer the texture of the reflections in the first - but suggest going way further than previous comments about another shot.
Ie ... a shot that has zero non reflections in it ... no foreground, no plain windows, no sky, no trees, signs etc ... if you imagine your first shot split into 9 equal areas / zones ... it'd be the middle bit, just to the left of the vertical building gap.
Staying with B/W would prob be good too, imo.
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I prefer the texture of the reflections in the first - but suggest going way further than previous comments about another shot.
Ie ... a shot that has zero non reflections in it ... no foreground, no plain windows, no sky, no trees, signs etc ... if you imagine your first shot split into 9 equal areas / zones ... it'd be the middle bit, just to the left of the vertical building gap.
Staying with B/W would prob be good too, imo.
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Thank you Paul but you're talking about another photo. I assume entirely the composition of it. For pictures of windows, I have others but for me, it is less interesting and more ... standard
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Cool apocalyptic reflection. You might want to play around with the crop some to try to make it more ambiguous. If try eliminating the dark patch on the left edge and maybe even the Elara sign on the right. That way, it would be less clear that we're seeing a distorted reflection. Just a thought.
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I like this a lot and share Richard's thoughts regarding cropping. Well done.
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I prefer the texture of the reflections in the first - but suggest going way further than previous comments about another shot.
Ie ... a shot that has zero non reflections in it ... no foreground, no plain windows, no sky, no trees, signs etc ... if you imagine your first shot split into 9 equal areas / zones ... it'd be the middle bit, just to the left of the vertical building gap.
Staying with B/W would prob be good too, imo.
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Thank you Paul but you're talking about another photo. I assume entirely the composition of it. For pictures of windows, I have others but for me, it is less interesting and more ... standard
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nice photos, i would just wish for some human walking around in photo preferably single person for sense of scale and intense feeling
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Impossible for the second, shot taken on 23th floor !
For the first, I focused on the graphism and cut the street...
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