Architectural shot

JuanoJuano Major grinsBrasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

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  • RichardRichard Mildly bemused Madrid, SpainPosts: 18,292Administrators, Vanilla Admin moderator

    Love it. Good comp, textures and conversion. Well done.

  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

    @Richard said:
    Love it. Good comp, textures and conversion. Well done.

    Many thanks!

  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,142Registered Users Major grins

    Great Cristobal!

    I would explore if dimming down the right bright edge helps....its competing hard with the leading line inside.....

  • toragstorags Major grins Posts: 4,183Registered Users Major grins

    Nice.. I like the high contrast

    Rags
  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

    Thanks guys.

  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Stuttgart, GermanyPosts: 99Registered Users Big grins

    Awesome picture Cristobal. I like the point of view and the patterns and lines it generates, and in combination with the textures on the walls and on the bottom it gets really interesting. Conversion is top notch, as we're used from your works.

    I do agree with Taz tho, that the foreground right part of the picture is too heavily lit - my eyes want to naturally follow from the left foreground to the right background, but get distracted by the highlights in the right sided foreground pillar. Other than that, truly great piece of work!

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  • black mambablack mamba Major grins Jacksonville, FLPosts: 6,188Registered Users Major grins

    Very nice, Cristóbal. I like the shot just as it is. Good conversion work.

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  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

    Thanks for the comments, here is a reworked version.

  • kurzvorzwoelfkurzvorzwoelf Stuttgart, GermanyPosts: 99Registered Users Big grins

    Perfect!

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  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

    Thanks!

  • willard3willard3 Jefe Máximo Posts: 1,584Registered Users Major grins
    edited April 13, 2018

    Odd man out, I like the original better. The bright vertical is balanced nicely by the bright floor on the left.

    Good conversion

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  • StumblebumStumblebum I shoot, therefore I am Posts: 7,142Registered Users Major grins

    Re-work is primo!

  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,184Registered Users Major grins

    Thanks for the input! Always interesting to hear different perspectives.

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