Awesome picture Cristobal. I like the point of view and the patterns and lines it generates, and in combination with the textures on the walls and on the bottom it gets really interesting. Conversion is top notch, as we're used from your works.
I do agree with Taz tho, that the foreground right part of the picture is too heavily lit - my eyes want to naturally follow from the left foreground to the right background, but get distracted by the highlights in the right sided foreground pillar. Other than that, truly great piece of work!
Where did you take it?
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Love it. Good comp, textures and conversion. Well done.
Many thanks!
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Great Cristobal!
I would explore if dimming down the right bright edge helps....its competing hard with the leading line inside.....
Nice.. I like the high contrast
Thanks guys.
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Awesome picture Cristobal. I like the point of view and the patterns and lines it generates, and in combination with the textures on the walls and on the bottom it gets really interesting. Conversion is top notch, as we're used from your works.
I do agree with Taz tho, that the foreground right part of the picture is too heavily lit - my eyes want to naturally follow from the left foreground to the right background, but get distracted by the highlights in the right sided foreground pillar. Other than that, truly great piece of work!
Where did you take it?
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Very nice, Cristóbal. I like the shot just as it is. Good conversion work.
Thanks for the comments, here is a reworked version.
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Perfect!
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Thanks!
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Odd man out, I like the original better. The bright vertical is balanced nicely by the bright floor on the left.
Good conversion
Re-work is primo!
Thanks for the input! Always interesting to hear different perspectives.
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