Which direction to go with logo

Ann McRae

On the road to customizing. I like the written script but suspect it is too difficult to read, so went this other direction.

Feedback -good, bad, ugly, please.

ann

evoryware

Third one is interesting. First one I couldn't really read. Looks like a word jumble that is used to stop spammers from registering on forums and sending garbage emails.

mike_k

I like the third one as well - although I like the shape of the graphic in the fourth one better (without the shadows). I don't see the M in the third one. I like the font in the third one a lot.

Art Scott

I have to agree that the first 2 are really hard to read and the thrid one is my fav of what you have here....the symbol, your intitals, looks like a brand .....is that its intention?

Good work

Ann McRae

Hi evoryware - I was worried about that. I really love those swirrly letters, but gotta be realistic.

Mikek - thanks. I will see what I can do by way of combining the two (#3 & #4)

Hi Art - yes, exactly my intent to use my initials as a brand. Obviously still need to tweek it some. Thanks

ann

denisegoldberg

I like the third one too - but I wasn't crazy about the different colors in the logo. I can't give you a good reason other than that (for me) it disturbed the image.

--- Denise

David_S85

The first's font is difficult to read, and the background does nothing to help.

The second one also doesn't work for the same reasons. Additionally, it would be next to impossible to read if made into a greyscale image. That is, BTW, one test for all logo candidates -- B&W conversion.

The third comes closest to readability, but I would like to see only one color there. The second color is too close to the first, and as such, becomes a distraction.

The fourth, while being one color (good), says "photoshop filter" with the drop shadow. One is usually best to avoid shadows or gradients if they ever wish a logo to be translated into line art (like an embroidery).

Here is a great resource Mike Lane offered up a few weeks ago, and also works as a library for inspiration:
http://logopond.co

Nikolai

Dear Ann,
I voted for 3d one and here's why:

The first two bear too much of the "I'm yet another chick with camera" feeling, they are bot too girly.

The fourth one is too much of a "I'm a construction worker" type of things.

The third, however, looks like written in runes, and it stands out.
I'd even make one step further and make the glyph itself more runic, more celtic, more petroglyphic if you will...
And yes, just as David said, one color only, please...

HTH

Ann McRae

Thanks, Denise.

ann

Ann McRae

Thanks, David. Good tip out the greyscale-ability.

I looked at logo pond a little while ago - there is a really cool version of 'ann' on there that I would love to mimic - but it is really stylized and not readable.

I will go try the greyscale thing.

ann

Ann McRae

Nikolai wrote:

I voted for 3d one and here's why:

The first two bear too much of the "I'm yet another chick with camera" feeling, they are bot too girly.

Nik - you sayin' I'm not girly???:curtsey

The fourth one is too much of a "I'm a construction worker" type of things.

And, well, now are you sayin' I'm not manly enough?????:ymca

The third, however, looks like written in runes, and it stands out.
I'd even make one step further and make the glyph itself more runic, more celtic, more petroglyphic if you will...

Oh, boy, I might need help figuring that out..... :stud


And yes, just as David said, one color only, please...

HTH

ann

Ann McRae

So I've been messing around trying to get it right, and have now got about a dozen examples with subtle, nd not subtle, differences here:

http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/gallery/2564746#134965675

Feedback would be great.

A couple of potential choices:

Nikolai

I like this one:


Just maaaybe a little less yellow a a tad more red... Make it like more bronzy/coppery/red gold

I like the runessness (tm:-) and chizelness

DavidTO

Ann,

I think you should start over. Sorry to say it, but the first two are too difficult to read, and the other ones are to tall.

You might want to check out the bamagazine.com article on creating a logo from letters. Or not. But I'd keep working on it.

Ann McRae

Hi David - the bunch I made today are the right size - 150 x 700 pixels. And I have ditched the first two. So, what about the general idea behind the rest?
I'd love to hear your opinion.
ann

DavidTO wrote:

Ann,

I think you should start over. Sorry to say it, but the first two are too difficult to read, and the other ones are to tall.

You might want to check out the bamagazine.com article on creating a logo from letters. Or not. But I'd keep working on it.

Ann McRae

Thanks, Nik. I'll go see what I can do to deepen the color - I agree, btw.

ann

Ann McRae

Done, Nik

Okay - look here:

http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/

(I need to sort the page out - the slidshow works when I am logged in but not when I am logged out asking in customization...)

and look at the logo against this nice rich brown:

http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/gallery/2565581

Certainly givig me some clues abot future color schemes.

ann

Nikolai

Ann,
1) Logo: I like it! I think you should park it for now and let it simmer for some time:-)
2) I honestly think that the picture doesn't do you justice
You look *much* better IRL. I understand that probably you, just like many of us, don't have many a chance to be in front of the camera and prefer to be on the VF side of it, but.... For this very reason I didn't include my own picture in my SM bio....

Let's work on it when we meet in Glacier NP, OK?

Ann McRae

Hi Nik

Do you watch Monty Python - i don't but hubby does and regularly recites line from it that fit the situation. This remind me of a line that is something like:
"it's an inaccurate representation of the sweetmeat"



Sadly, though, I am aging, and am in need of softening filters!!! And a good work out regime that I can do between work and soccer taxi duties!

I am going to leave the logo etc alone. Got lots done this weekend - really feel some progress.

Thanks for your help!!
ann

DavidTO

Ann McRae wrote:

Hi David - the bunch I made today are the right size - 150 x 700 pixels. And I have ditched the first two. So, what about the general idea behind the rest?
I'd love to hear your opinion.
ann

Ann, I guess it really comes down to how you want to spend your time. I think you can do better with your logo, but maybe it's fine as it is, and you should concentrate on your family and getting some shooting done....

I don't care for the extrusion, the shadowing, etc.

I'm also not sure why your logo is as it is. I mean, a logo should make sense unto itself, and for my money, yours doesn't.

If you want to spend more time on it, I would ask what you want your logo to say to the viewer....clean, sophisticated, fun, playful, creative, etc. Then take a look at your logo and determine how it meets those goals.

Or just go shoot.

raptorcaptor

I like the third logo, but I would use a more modern sans serif type face for the text. Something elongated perhaps to compliment the logo. I would also keep the text on one line. Hope this helps!

Scott Buel

I like the 3rd one, too. It looks like a brand logo.

Ann McRae

David

I have wanted to get some customizing done, and I have finally done a bit - so that is an accomplishment.

I think the logo/monogram will evolve - probably for a while.

Shooting is really sporadic now - lousy weather, too many other commitments.

In any case, as you are a pro at visual arts, I really respect your pnion and will take your words to heart.

Thanks

ann

DavidTO wrote:

Ann, I guess it really comes down to how you want to spend your time. I think you can do better with your logo, but maybe it's fine as it is, and you should concentrate on your family and getting some shooting done....

I don't care for the extrusion, the shadowing, etc.

I'm also not sure why your logo is as it is. I mean, a logo should make sense unto itself, and for my money, yours doesn't.

If you want to spend more time on it, I would ask what you want your logo to say to the viewer....clean, sophisticated, fun, playful, creative, etc. Then take a look at your logo and determine how it meets those goals.

Or just go shoot.

Ann McRae

Thanks Glenn

I will keep your suggestion in mind.

ann

raptorcaptor wrote:

I like the third logo, but I would use a more modern sans serif type face for the text. Something elongated perhaps to compliment the logo. I would also keep the text on one line. Hope this helps!

Ann McRae

Thanks, Scott.


ann

Scott Buel wrote:

I like the 3rd one, too. It looks like a brand logo.

Ann McRae

I Looooooovvvvvvvve the orange theme color!!!!!

It compliments so many of my photos.

ann

Ann McRae

Been tweaking it again this weekend - changed the banner again. Updated the about, pricing and soccer pages.
http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/
Would love some feedback.

ann

Andy

Ann McRae wrote:

Been tweaking it again this weekend - changed the banner again. Updated the about, pricing and soccer pages.
http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/
Would love some feedback.

ann

Ann, you know me very well, and you know that I don't hold back.

OK here it is: the logo is jarring and the color scheme is detracting from your great photos. I don't have the answer for you, but this logo and color scheme has got to go! Perhaps a different logo with the orange theme, would work better.

:cry This hurts me as much as you I'm sure.

Nikolai

Ann
I saw this one recently, Adobe's John Nack's post on logos, maybe it'll give you a few ideas:

http://blogs.adobe.com/jnack/2007/03/whats_in_your_l.html

HTH

Andy

Ann McRae wrote:

Been tweaking it again this weekend - changed the banner again. Updated the about, pricing and soccer pages.
http://canadian-ann.smugmug.com/
Would love some feedback.

ann

Ann, if you'd like to work with me this week, I can work up some logos & color schemes with you?

Ann McRae

andy
Wouldn't want you to hold back, not at all.

You know when you work on something all day, you loose your objectivity.

So lets break the problem apart:
1. Is it the font that you dislike?
2. Is it the monogram?
3. Is it the color of the logo?
4. Is it the color of the page? (look at the soccer page to see the logo on green)

The idea is to showcase the photography, so what would do that best?

I am much more worried about the changes I am making to content - cosmetic changes like new banner or new page color I understand how to change...and probably will many, many more times.

Andy wrote:

Ann, you know me very well, and you know that I don't hold back.

OK here it is: the logo is jarring and the color scheme is detracting from your great photos. I don't have the answer for you, but this logo and color scheme has got to go! Perhaps a different logo with the orange theme, would work better.

I'm all for constructive criticism cuz it can only help me be better.

Thanks!!!!

:cry This hurts me as much as you I'm sure.