Deformation (add +1)

TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins
edited December 16, 2017 in Street and Documentary

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  • RichardRichard Mildly bemused Madrid, SpainPosts: 18,813Administrators, Vanilla Admin moderator

    Cool apocalyptic reflection. You might want to play around with the crop some to try to make it more ambiguous. If try eliminating the dark patch on the left edge and maybe even the Elara sign on the right. That way, it would be less clear that we're seeing a distorted reflection. Just a thought.

  • TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins

    Thank you for your visit. Yes, the playground is open ! :)

  • JuanoJuano Major grins Brasilia, BrazilPosts: 3,559Registered Users Major grins

    I like this a lot and share Richard's thoughts regarding cropping. Well done.

  • TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins

    Thanks to visit :)

  • TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins

    Another point of view from 23th level of the MGM Hotel beside.

  • puzzledpaulpuzzledpaul low down bum Posts: 1,620Registered Users Major grins

    I prefer the texture of the reflections in the first - but suggest going way further than previous comments about another shot.
    Ie ... a shot that has zero non reflections in it ... no foreground, no plain windows, no sky, no trees, signs etc ... if you imagine your first shot split into 9 equal areas / zones ... it'd be the middle bit, just to the left of the vertical building gap.
    Staying with B/W would prob be good too, imo.

    pp

  • TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins

    @puzzledpaul said:
    I prefer the texture of the reflections in the first - but suggest going way further than previous comments about another shot.
    Ie ... a shot that has zero non reflections in it ... no foreground, no plain windows, no sky, no trees, signs etc ... if you imagine your first shot split into 9 equal areas / zones ... it'd be the middle bit, just to the left of the vertical building gap.
    Staying with B/W would prob be good too, imo.

    pp

    Thank you Paul but you're talking about another photo. I assume entirely the composition of it. For pictures of windows, I have others but for me, it is less interesting and more ... standard :)

    Thank you for your visit

  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub One Inspired soul Posts: 10,552Registered Users Major grins

    nice photos, i would just wish for some human walking around in photo preferably single person for sense of scale and intense feeling

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  • TasmanianTasmanian Quebec, CanadaPosts: 482Registered Users Major grins

    Impossible for the second, shot taken on 23th floor !

    For the first, I focused on the graphism and cut the street...

    Thanks :)

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