>> challenge 15 - comment and critiques thread <<

gubbs

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Originally Posted by gubbs



boy do i enjoy your street work, gubby! this shot could be improved by a tiny bit faster shutter, the people are just a bit too blurred imo. also it's a bit u.e. imo. a fun scene though, and perfect for the theme. keep at it, train stations are great spots for movement!
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andy :andy


Thanks andy,

The dissapointment is me behind now .... back to onwards and upwards (hopefully)

These really are challenges, I look and look at the pictures and often miss the point. The idea of this picture was to try and get a current of people flowing through the station. So I darkened it with a solid black layer, trying to get the people to sort of become one?? Maybe I succeeded in doing that but at the expense of the overall picture (??) here is the original with only a minor level adjustment.




Thanks again for all the work andy!! Very much apreciated

lynnesite

gubbs wrote:

Lynnesite, great picture

Thank you, gubbs!

I have good models.

AltPro

ginger_55 wrote:

Thanks to all who helped me, particularly David and Ginette, who logged on last night giving me valuable suggestions. I am going to use it as my screen saver.
I don't think I would feel so good about it, if I had not borrowed the suggestions and implemented some of them in my way.

I am so happy. Thanks to all!
ginger

Ginger... Thank-you...
And you SHOULD be proud... You have done well!
ginette