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  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Honest Criticism for Pathfinder
    pathfinder wrote:
    All right - I may have found a frame I like - I am sure it is not to everyone's tastes, but I find it compelling in a certain kind of way. It is in color and B&W so Rut and others can chose which they prefer. I am open to all sorts of honest criticism.
    I don't know about Rutt, but I am trying to think of what I could say that would be dishonest criticism.

    I like them. I like the black and white best.

    The color shows a little more detail at the bottom, the dark area, particularly at the bottom of the headstone. I would show that same detail in the blk and white, unless it is just not showing on my monitor.

    That is it for the honest criticism.

    Will get back to you with the dishonest,
    ginger
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    rutt wrote:
    Give this the LAB curves treatment and it will be a contender!
    Hi Rutt, is this any better?
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Silver lake
  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Hi Lynn, missed you...
    lynnma wrote:
    Silver lake

    We really missed you. Seemed so quiet here all week. Not much chit chat, little posting.

    I think I like this one. The first one I like best in color, but it seems to lack detail. Water is kind of bright. This one has lots of detail in the water and the sky. The double row of hills is very interesting. Very nice.
    "A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds." - Francis Bacon
    Susan Appel Photography My Blog
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    snapapple wrote:
    We really missed you. Seemed so quiet here all week. Not much chit chat, little posting.

    I think I like this one. The first one I like best in color, but it seems to lack detail. Water is kind of bright. This one has lots of detail in the water and the sky. The double row of hills is very interesting. Very nice.
    Hey! thanks Snap! I was canoe camping in the forest on lake Umbaygog in Maine. Beautiful place, lots of rain, bugs, critters and peace.

    Seems to me that all my shots look the same latelyrolleyes1.gif I have to get reading all thats been going on while I've been away.
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    lynnma wrote:
    Hi Rutt, is this any better?
    Lynn, I like this BETTER one. I don't like the rough one.

    ginger
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,708 moderator
    edited August 17, 2004
    ginger_55 wrote:
    I don't know about Rutt, but I am trying to think of what I could say that would be dishonest criticism.

    I like them. I like the black and white best.

    The color shows a little more detail at the bottom, the dark area, particularly at the bottom of the headstone. I would show that same detail in the blk and white, unless it is just not showing on my monitor.

    That is it for the honest criticism.

    Will get back to you with the dishonest,
    ginger
    I just can't hold my breath any longer tho, Ginger. rolleyes1.gif

    I agree that the B&W seems a little darker along the lower one half of the stone - I did not notice this so much on my monitor at home - I'll look at it again, and if need be, I'll dodge it a little.thumb.gif
    Pathfinder - www.pathfinder.smugmug.com

    Moderator of the Technique Forum and Finishing School on Dgrin
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    ginger_55 wrote:
    Lynn, I like this BETTER one. I don't like the rough one.

    ginger
    Hi Snappy and Lynn. I like the whispy cloud coming down over the mtn in the calm one.

    And I don't like choppy water. I have discovered that I find it very difficult to photograph so it doesn't appear just "noisy".

    But when you fixed the first one, and in color, Lynn, you brought out that cloud whispering down over the mtn on the right, and I like that.

    Snappy, I love your photo on The Challenge. And you thought you wouldn't have time.

    I tell you all, I am running out of talent. I can feel it draining, what is left.

    Geez, this is good,the work being done this week, to equal my own work would just undo me, but to hand in less, well, I can see why Sid didn't enter that one challenge.

    I am relieved to have some of the pressure off. I did want to go to the kids, the guitar, the dancing and the food, at the market today, but it says rain.

    Bill goes back to work next week, and he won't be available the end of this week. Anything interesting to photograph at a hospital.............and in wide.
    Are all the babies gone now??

    ginger
    always used to sneak around to look at the babies.

    Is Scary.
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • dugmardugmar Registered Users Posts: 756 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    lynnma wrote:
    Hey! thanks Snap! I was canoe camping in the forest on lake Umbaygog in Maine. Beautiful place, lots of rain, bugs, critters and peace.

    Seems to me that all my shots look the same latelyrolleyes1.gif I have to get reading all thats been going on while I've been away.
    I can almost hear the frogs in this shot.

    Doug
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    dugmar wrote:
    I can almost hear the frogs in this shot.

    Doug
    Hi Dug... put your head net on for this one...rolleyes1.gif
  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    lynnma wrote:
    Hi Dug... put your head net on for this one...rolleyes1.gif
    Lynn, do not pass go. Steepen the A+B curves by 10-15 symetrically in all the woods shots.
    If not now, when?
  • AndyAndy Registered Users Posts: 50,016 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    welcome to the funhouse, johnny!
    wave.gif welcome, johnny. some nice shots there, thanks for contributing and going for the challenge!

    Well here goes, my first post. Exciting. I've been lurking for a bit courtesy of my friend dugmar. This is a great forum and I intend to participate as much as possible. I've been looking for good wide-angle moments since this challenge started and don't think I've had that magic moment yet, but here are some pics I've captured so far.
  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Like the woods...
    lynnma wrote:
    Hey! thanks Snap! I was canoe camping in the forest on lake Umbaygog in Maine. Beautiful place, lots of rain, bugs, critters and peace.

    Seems to me that all my shots look the same latelyrolleyes1.gif I have to get reading all thats been going on while I've been away.

    Lynn,
    I like the woods shots, but like the expert says, some LAB curves would help. The composition doesn't feel right on this shot with the fallen tree. I think a little diagonal angle would feel better. I like the next one *a lot*. The reflections are beautiful. Some work on those colors and it's perfect. Sorry I can't stick around to chat. It's lunch hour here. Back to work for me...
    "A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds." - Francis Bacon
    Susan Appel Photography My Blog
  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Hi Johnny...
    Welcome! Good to have some new blood. Glad you're accepting the *challenge*. I like the first shot the best. The strong diagonal line is great. I think it could use a little *pop*, as we say around here. Some curves maybe. Has good potential.
    Well here goes, my first post. Exciting. I've been lurking for a bit courtesy of my friend dugmar. This is a great forum and I intend to participate as much as possible. I've been looking for good wide-angle moments since this challenge started and don't think I've had that magic moment yet, but here are some pics I've captured so far.

    not quite full wide (29mm = 46mm on a canon 10D)
    IMG_5604.jpg
    "A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds." - Francis Bacon
    Susan Appel Photography My Blog
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    snapapple wrote:
    Lynn,
    I like the woods shots, but like the expert says, some LAB curves would help. The composition doesn't feel right on this shot with the fallen tree. I think a little diagonal angle would feel better. I like the next one *a lot*. The reflections are beautiful. Some work on those colors and it's perfect. Sorry I can't stick around to chat. It's lunch hour here. Back to work for me...
    Thanks snap.. this is with some curve in lab.. I'm not sure what I'm doing tho...
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    more curve.. looks over done to me...
  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Well here goes, my first post. Exciting. I've been lurking for a bit courtesy of my friend dugmar. This is a great forum and I intend to participate as much as possible. I've been looking for good wide-angle moments since this challenge started and don't think I've had that magic moment yet, but here are some pics I've captured so far.

    not quite full wide (29mm = 46mm on a canon 10D)


    17mm = 27.2mm


    17mm = 27.2mm
    Hi There Johnny D! welcome to Dgrin.. you'll have fun here. We are an obsessive bunch... especially around challengesrolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gif
    Nice shots so far.. lots of experts in this forum to help if needed.
    lynnma
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    lynnma wrote:
    more curve.. looks over done to me...
    Lynn, it probably is overdone, but it looks great! clap.gif And when you are there, immersed in it, how does it look?

    That ab curve thing really did a trick, Rutt.

    Now, the question is, what is reality?

    And now that you aren't there, do the frogs still make a noise?

    g
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • ruttrutt Registered Users Posts: 6,511 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    ginger_55 wrote:

    Now, the question is, what is reality?
    That's a very deep question, even in it's most shallow color theory meaning. I know both of you (Ginger and Lynn) own DM's Professional Photoshop. Read the section called "Pearls Before Swine" on page 4. In fact read all of chapter 1.

    I can't say it as well as Dan. I can't make the argument as clearly as he does. But the point is that there is no reality. The brain and eye are just to interconnected. Here is one example that really surprised me. When I took Dan Margulis' class, the chief photographer for the Cleveland Museum of Art was also taking it. His job take pictures of the art for:
    1. archival and academic purposes, to ensure there is a record if anything happens to the originals and to allow people to study the collection without actually visiting,
    2. books and catalogs of the collections and shows, and
    3. posters
    I asked why he was taking Dan's class. Why not use a spectroscope and just get the colors right? Well it turns out that right is different at different sizes (you have to make Cezanne as bright as von Gogh if you reproduce it small in a cataloge, otherwise you just can't see it. Posters can't really be the same colors as paintings, something about the smooth shiny surface makes the colors look wrong if ther are right. Go figure.

    I've posted it here before, but here is my favorite optical illusion. It proves you just can't trust your eyes:

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    If not now, when?
  • johnnydangerjohnnydanger Registered Users Posts: 51 Big grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Okay, I've got some more shots from today. I was seeing in black and white for a little bit and I like what I came up with, but not having any experience doing black and white what do you all think?

    Also I subtly adjusted the levels on the red fire escape shot to make the yellow to red wash more vivid. Any other recommendations on it?

    Here's todays shots all at 17mm:
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    bw-scene-2.jpg

    bw-scene.jpg


    Here's the adjusted fire escape shot.
    IMG_5604v2.jpg
    Some people are like Slinkies... not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you see one tumble down the stairs.
  • AltProAltPro Registered Users Posts: 478 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    lynnma wrote:
    Hi all I'm back from the woods.. couple of shots so far. Have to unpack stinky tent etc..


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    Lynn:

    This is spectacular! I absolutely love this one.... Works great in B&W. Nice composition, to my eye. KUDOS

    ginette
    "In the End, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."
  • ShakeyShakey Registered Users Posts: 1,004 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Wow I can not believe all the amazing shots Lynmma you have a couple that knocked me offa my feetbowdown.gif
    And this Jonnydanger comes out of left field to be a contenderclap.gif Welcome JD


    Ginger puts up so many good pictures it is like going to a diner that has too much that is to good to choose from.ne_nau.gif which of hers I like better


    I guess I will throw in a couple more . No Dogs no Kids no City just a bit of Gods Country. O'Canada:D
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    And of course my usual ... a black and white
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    Tim
  • ShakeyShakey Registered Users Posts: 1,004 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    At a Moss For Words
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    Tim
  • MitchellMitchell Registered Users Posts: 3,503 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Museums, wide angle lens, 6 year olds, and ambient lighting only don't mix!!
  • lynnesitelynnesite Registered Users Posts: 747 Major grins
    edited August 17, 2004
    Shakey wrote:
    Wow I can not believe all the amazing shots Lynmma you have a couple that knocked me offa my feet<img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/bowdown.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" >
    And this Jonnydanger comes out of left field to be a contender<img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/clap.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" > Welcome JD

    I guess I will throw in a couple more . No Dogs no Kids no City just a bit of Gods Country. O'Canada:D
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    And of course my usual ... a black and white
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    Tim

    Welcome JD as well, I'd like your shots better if there was a person or something of interest in the foreground--otherwise, fine composition and tonal balance.

    Shakey, I like that shot better in color, in BW the highlight detail on the water seems to be lost?

    Lynn, I like the clothesline shot the best. <scratching at those skeeters though>
  • ShakeyShakey Registered Users Posts: 1,004 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2004
    lynnesite wrote:
    Shakey, I like that shot better in color, in BW the highlight detail on the water seems to be lost?
    Yes you are correct I wanted a moody shot I will lighten up the picture.
    Tim
  • ShakeyShakey Registered Users Posts: 1,004 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2004
    Curb Side Blues
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    Tim
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2004
    Coast Guard Station 18mm by ginger
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    When Hurricane Hugo hit in 1989, I was living across from this Coast Guard Station. Loved it! Walk to the beach, great view of this station in the front, joggers running by. The hurricane struck, 5 feet of water.

    Didn't plan to talk about the hurricane, just wanted to mention that I used to live across from this place. The sunset tonight was spectacular. An hour before the sky was just a dull grey, as it had been all day.

    ginger
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • ginger_55ginger_55 Registered Users Posts: 8,416 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2004
    You all have snuck in some great photos while I was gone tonight. Can't leave this place anymore.

    Shakey, you really have something there in god's country. (did you see, god paid us a call tonight?) You really captured your moment.

    Mitchell, I like the museum shot a lot.

    Lynn, one of my favorite "subjects" is clothes lines, so I would be a sucker even if the shot weren't so good. Did you purposely put the shoes there?
    The other shot, I still like it better in color, the wispy clouds really show up.

    Johnny, I like the barnacles, just cause I do. The red wall still catches my eye. I am not an expert on blk and white, I just like it in certain cases. Can't help you with that. Don't see a lot of barnacle shots, or I don't. Like yours.

    If I missed anyone, I will catch it.

    I just have to post you all, just gotta. I was so discouraged for most of the night, but my stuff did not turn out bad.

    Believe me, god is easy compared to kids, right Mitchell. HAHA, Andy, I went out to that market again to get pictures of kids dancing, without cutting anyone out. OK, I have a wide angle lens, the place is packed, the kids are dancing, or not. One thing they are is terrified of me, and the parents didn't trust me much either. The whole thing wasn't easy. Cutest darn kids in the most beautiful clothes. Up to about the age of five, maybe, the parents had dressed the kids the way some of us think kids ought to be dressed. Bows in their hair. And the evil eye whenever I was around with my camera. Yes, life was difficult. Then my fortune changed, OK, I got the kid shots, but I was not happy, not until a very nice farm family kind of posed for me, by that I mean, they didn't run or give me the evil eye when I asked if I could take their picture, got a good one, too. And life got better.

    ginger
    After all is said and done, it is the sweet tea.
  • lynnesitelynnesite Registered Users Posts: 747 Major grins
    edited August 18, 2004
    Shakey wrote:
    Curb Side Blues
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    Tim

    Tim this really ROCKS! I love the vivid color, the composition--the asymmetry creates a wonderful tension, this is a Contender IMO.
    Lynne thumb.gif
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